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International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantage if increased tourists overweigh disadvantages?

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The past few decades have seen a considerable increase in the number of global tourists. By decreasing the travelling costs, more
countries
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 have changed their
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 trade policies to accept more travellers.
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 there are many drawbacks associated with
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 global trend,
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 essay will discuss why
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 trade is more advantageous to the
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. On the one hand, a potential disadvantage may be destructive effects on historical buildings. Excess capacity of visitors flooding into historical areas causes the damage and erosion of these valuable buildings.
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, the damage that global
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 has caused to the environment in many places is even more worrying.
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, Some visitors who travel to Africa for illegal hunting have endangered and extinction some species of animals.
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, a primary advantage of more
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 is its positive impact on economic income. In fact, for many
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, a large proportion of their national income is provided by
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. One particularly salient example of
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 is Italy - the countless number of visitors visiting
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 country bring them millions of dollars each year and several related job opportunities. A
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 benefit is the influence of the
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 industry on the recognition of the country's culture at the global level. It means that by increasing interaction between the host country and other nations, they can introduce their cultural products and traditions to other
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. In conclusion, damaging nature and the historical section would indeed seem disadvantageous under certain circumstances.
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, its positive effects in terms of economic and cultural points of view override the disadvantages.

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