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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Time is altering and so does human's communication through new technologies, as products
such
 as computers have made interpretation possible at a fast pace.
This
 might be a formative situation but
also
 creates severe issues as well. Languages are an essential part of the cultural setting in human society there for organisations and NGOs encourage reserving them by learning approaches as is it the best way to keep alive. It is
also
 worth mentioning that diplomatic and cultural relationships are made through linguistic backgrounds, it is no surprise that
such
 a mission is too important to be processed by computers cause any possible mistake is quite expensive.
Besides
 all these factors scientists have declared that learning another language can prevent diseases
such
 as Alzheimer and some individuals fancy learning exotic languages.
On the other hand
, it should be admitted that learning a foreign language can be time-consuming and appear highly expensive so it might fail us in an immediate situation,
also
 it would not hurt to use a developing tech that brings up accessible conditions to transfer data swiftly to speed up the trading all over the world even if
this
 tech fails in cultural scale. Time is the killer of trading as the businessmen have always said so in
this
 particular area computers are necessary. I believe new technologies and artificial intelligence will eventually appear as a game-changer but the point is that we are far from that spot yet,
besides
 it is vital to comprehend that devices can not replace traditional human translation.
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