Some people believe that it is responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet, other believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Having a healthy body and,
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, a healthy mind is one of the most important concerns of every human being. A group of
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believe that every person should be careful about their health and diet, whereas others believe the
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are responsible for the quality levels of foods. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. On the one hand, some
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claim that since the individuals themselves decide what kind of lifestyle they choose and what they eat, their health is on them. Indeed, many
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put a considerable amount of unhealthy
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on their daily diets,
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as high fatty
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or fast
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, they suffer from diseases
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as heart-related illnesses and diabetes.
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, I do not find
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argument convincing because if
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are aware of the problems that
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kind of unhealthy
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can bring, they might avoid these unhealthy dietary habits and promote their healthful lifestyle. 
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, some
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justifiably argue that it is the responsibility of
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to monitor and control the
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that is
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available to the public.
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,
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group believes that
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should
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provide healthy
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with a high level of nutrients in the markets and make sure
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market is open for all
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.
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, they must Strictly investigate the quality of
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served by restaurants.
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, in many developed countries,
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have access to organic
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in supermarkets alongside ordinary
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, The government must make
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aware of a healthy diet and a good lifestyle. To conclude, It is undeniable that every person can choose how to live and what to eat. But in my view, it is the responsibility of
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to ensure all
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conveniently access a healthy diet and be aware of why they should eat healthy
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then
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they can choose between them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health-conscious decisions
  • self-discipline
  • informed choices
  • personal accountability
  • regulating food industries
  • implementing policies
  • healthy eating
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies for healthy food
  • enabling environment
  • accessible
  • affordable
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