The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter -describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly -explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours -suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding your recent changes of waste gathering schedule in my area named Harlow Town, which is creating severe health issues. The change from each week to every two weeks waste collection is a nice strategy to save the government’s costs for sure, but Harlow Town is gaining a reputation as one of the dirtiest areas in

this

megacity. All streets of my area are dirty as the dirt is everywhere on streets overflowing from the bin in front of every house. About my neighbours, all my neighbours are complaining about dirt, which is assisting the growth of patients, who are suffering from fever, malaria, and other health diseases. The number of pests and vultures in the area has

also

grown significantly. We are requesting you to return to the previous schedule, which will help to maintain the cleanliness in my community and others;

otherwise

, my neighbours and I are planning for a protest on Friday. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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