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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

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Learning a foreign
language
 is highly necessary for young
children
 in primary
school
. So some schools start teaching foreign
languages
 for young
children
 and the advantages of that outweigh its disadvantages. Some people think that primary
school
 students are too young to learn
languages
 and that hinders the acquisition of knowledge.
This
 is because young
children
 only learn easy things at
school
 and focus on having fun and because of that learning new things
such
 as a new
language
 is extremely difficult for them. There are
also
 many opinions that it is not necessary to learn foreign
languages
 in primary
school
 because it is too early to learn. Youngsters may learn these when they are older.
On the other hand
, learning a
language
 early is a blessing because it can help us adapt
first
 and make it easier to learn later. For young
children
,
this
 might be hard at
first
 but during the learning process young
children
 will slowly get used to the new
language
 if they keep studying continuously and they can practise speaking the
language
 with teachers or their parents and be able to absorb knowledge better thereby improving learning
languages
 efficiency. When it comes to secondary
school
language
 learning becomes harder so learning foreign
languages
 at a younger age is not too early but it would be more convenient when you want to study higher. In conclusion, I think that teaching a foreign
language
 to younger
children
 can be more advantageous. I believe that the more we learn, the better we are.
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