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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #money #gift #teenagers
The given maps show the development of university campuses from 2010 to date. Overall, the campus has been extended and had more facilities than previously. According to both maps, the student accommodations had few changes which was the right side one had been removed though
instead
 of that two new buildings were built for staying nearby.
Similarly
, the top left corner was occupied by university offices which turned into a science building. In 2010, there was a teaching block to teach subjects like science and arts which later have been altered into a single arts building.
Furthermore
, there was a restaurant and a couple of shops to take a break which
also
 turned into a single accommodation. The lake,
however
, the central point of the campus has remained the same except few changes like the removal of the lawn and seating area.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial responsibility
  • budget
  • save
  • informed spending decisions
  • personal preferences
  • practical and efficient
  • unwanted or inappropriate gifts
  • impersonal
  • emotional value
  • thoughtfulness
  • personal consideration
  • wise financial decisions
  • frivolously
  • lasting memories and experiences
  • educational courses
  • hobby-related equipment
  • long-lasting positive impact
  • fostering interests and skills
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