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You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter -Tell them where you saw the advertisement -Explain why you would like to go -Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding your published advert to become an unpaid English teacher for the foreign program. About your advert, I was inspired
from
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/by your printing advert on the daily mail
last
 Friday, which was seeking assistance to teach poor children of the northern part of Bangladesh.
In addition
,
this
 commercial was
also
 telecasted by your organisation in the state media. My inspiration came from an earlier visit to
this
 country, which was happened almost five years before when I had experienced how helpless the children were to fulfil their basic needs.
Consequently
, I would love to contribute to the rebuilding of
this
 country without any financial interest of mine. My teaching
method
 of English is different from other teachers, which is already introduced in some parts of Africa.
Therefore
, it will be a fast
method
 that could assist them to learn
this
 lingo a lot quicker when compared to the traditional
method
, in my view. I am awaiting your response regarding
this
 project as my
method
 could help you to save a significant amount of money. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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