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In the furture , nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With the innovation of technology,
people
 today can have a higher quality of life in a variety of fields,
for example
 reading something.
As a result
 of
this
, there is nobody who will purchase printed materials.
This
 essay, as my opinion leads to, will try to elaborate on reasons why I strongly agree with
this
 idea with some considerations. To commence with, I believe that the strong point of
internet
 services is being flexible. It is mainly because
people
 today are too busy so they prefer the flexibility of the
Internet
. To clarify
this
,
people
 can read everything by any
internet
 tools whatever they want wherever they want.
For instance
, a lot of Japanese workers have to take one hour or more to go to work and come back to their homes every day. So they have a tendency to read something on their mobile phones.
Conversely
, if there is a man who read the physical newspaper on the train, other
people
 who are close to him are in trouble definitely.
Therefore
, there is no doubt that since they read materials on the
Internet
, they can use their time effectively even if they are on the train.
In addition
, online reading is one of the advanced technological developments and it has different kinds of books, magazines, and
newspapers
 without needing extra luggage.
In other words
, one device has not only domestic but
also
 international resources and it saves a lot of space in their bags.
For example
, when I want to get information about the US, I have to buy American
newspapers
 because it is natural for newspaper companies to write affairs about their own country.
On the other hand
, through using the
Internet
 devices, I can read many international
newspapers
 like THE NEW YORK TIMES and BBC news with no real books or
newspapers
. To sum up, I strongly agree with the idea that all
people
 will tend to read by online devices because of accessible everywhere with no other space and books.
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