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Tourism is increased in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country

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In recent times,the rate at which
tourists
 troop into foreign countries has seen an upward spike.
Foreigners
 travel far from their homes to visit various countries.I believe that its benefits are more than the drawbacks.I will be discussing tourism boosting the economy and causing high employment
level
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 while the disadvantages are high rate of social vices and high cost of living.
First
 and foremost,one of the advantages of
tourists
 visiting a city is that
,
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it boosts the economy and
increase
 employment in that,the more
tourists
 purchase items that
increases
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 the financial status of the
country
.Jobs are created which helps them to put food on their families tables.
For example
,United Arab Emirates has a lot of
tourists
 visiting the
country
 on a daily basis.Due to
this
increase
,more amenities have been sited at vantage points and
people
 have been employed to attend to them.
However
,
this
 practice has enriched the culture of the
country
In contrast
, there are some drawbacks of
tourists
 coming to town.The
first
 is
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 in social vices,
for
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 smoking,
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 in teenage pregnancy and
increase
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 in crime rates.
Furthermore
,the cost of living increases
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 the
the
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high numbers of
foreigners
 in one
country
.Most
people
 who sell in our markets tend to plummet the prices goods and services due to these
people
 because most
people
 believe anyone who comes from a foreign land Is well to do. In summary, I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of
foreigners
 visiting a particular
country
.Tourism will boost the economy and cause
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 employment
level
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 while the disadvantages are
high
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 rate of social vices and
high
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 cost of living.The government is
also
 responsible for the beautification of its
country
hence
 more
foreigners
 visiting the
country
.
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