In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be =driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles ouitweigh the disadvantages?

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Аt the present time, the machine industry is developing rapidly and is achieving a lot more year by year. We have varieties of
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, and one of them is electric
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that are controlled by autopilot mode.
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way of driving includes pros and cons
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as the price of
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, the risk of an accident, mistakes in the design of the controls, and so on. These self-driving
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are programmed by highly skilled workers, so they are less likely to have an accident since these programmed pilots are robots. And they work only according to the program and do not make unnecessary mistakes.
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, if all traffic rules are programmed in these robots,
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there will be no violations on the road, which is
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a plus. As an example, I can cite the Google Waymo project.
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self-driving automobile is already authorized. And it has been tested by the company for almost 10 years. The company reports that in 2015 their
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have already covered almost 100,000 miles, which shows us the safety of the car. But
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, these automobiles have their drawbacks.
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, it is their cost. As we all know, these vehicles are developed with high technology and,
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, have high prices.
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, the employees use good materials for the safety of customers. And
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one of the reasons why they are so expensive. These
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can be bought for about $ 100,000.
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, the world-famous Tesla electric car costs about $ 140,000.
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prices are not affordable for many clients and it is not profitable. And
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, if there are some minor errors in the development of the program,
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the entire autopilot program will not work. So
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a problem. In cases where the car was created with errors,
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can lead to major accidents in the future and people will become even more afraid of self-driving
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. Having come to the conclusion, I personally don't really support these kinds of
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. Since they are not yet fully and tono developed. We cannot be sure that they can work without errors. So for now, manual control is the best way to drive.
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