Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the recent

society

,

people

compare

success

in two major ways.majority understands it as a way of earning a lot of

money

while others believe that scientists or teachers are the most

successfull

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successful

as they contribute to the

society

.in my opinion,

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believe that successful

people

are the individual who earns a lot of

money

.

This

essay will discuss both views.

firstly

,

people

who earn

money

are the most successful

this

is because when someone can earn

a

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good

money

,he or she can plan a good business which can eventually

improves

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his or her economic status ,

for example

,

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recently got a job with wonderful payroll

this

has made me to build good residentials and to be honest

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do a good outcome.The

money

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get from the premises can be used to expand other business ideas that

initially

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had planned like starting my own hospital.

This

is what we termed as being a

success

.

secondly

,with enough

money

,you can live a

luxury

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life.In my county, Kenya politicians are known for earning good

money

.They live in big houses driven by the most expensive cars and get better health care services.All of these you cannot definitely do when you are not

successfull

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successful

and with

money

all of these are possible.

Nevertheless

,Scientists or teachers can as well be successful by contributing to

the

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society

directly or indirectly these are seen when actually our children perform well in schools and

this

can be seen as a major

success

for teachers.Scientist as well helps us in the weather analysis

this

can help us to plan well during our planting seasons. In conclusion,

success

can be either seen when

people

are earning good

money

or contributions to

society

by teaches and scientists but on my side, I believe that only

people

that are earning can be most

successfull

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successful

successfully

.