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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is said that since
people
 will be able to read anything they desire online for free in the
future
, no one will purchase paper books and newspapers. I strongly agree with
this
 view mainly because of the advertising market and
rising
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raising
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 awareness of the environment. One reason is that publishers, authors and journalists will be able to earn money by advertising products and services. In the
future
, everyone will have access to the internet, which will allow them to see ads online. Businesses will spend more on
such
 ads internationally, and publishers will publish everything online for free to increase the number of views and receive more ads.
This
 will lead everyone to read online and save money. Protecting the environment is another reason. The lack of resources
such
 as trees and water will be an issue to be considered in the
future
.
People
 will,
therefore
, prevent deforestation by cutting paper use.
Moreover
, more environmental disasters,
for
instance
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 pollution, would lead
people
 to be more concerned about the environment, and they will avoid printed materials to decrease lead pollution and paper waste. Some may argue that reading on a screen would be annoying and unhealthy since it causes eye strain and headaches, especially for
people
 with weak eyesight.
However
, I think developments in device technologies will overcome
such
 issues, and printed newspapers or books will not be bought anymore in the
future
 because
people
 will have free access to anything they want to read online.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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