In spite of advances mad in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry Why is the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is certainly true that many developments have been made in the agricultural sector, yet every day many people around the globe continue to suffer from hunger. The aim of
this
essay is to examine possible reasons behind
this
issue and
also
suggest some ways to tackle the situation.
First
of all, the main dilemma case is that most developing
countries
couldn'
t
produce enough food products. Pur more simply the underdevelopment
countries
don'
t
have enough manufacturers and any ideas as well. As a
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result they have to import food goods from another wealthy county into their county so they spent too much cost. One of the perfect examples of
this
is South Africa's many inhabitants had died because of their starving problem. Africa tropical country so that very warmer with dry soil
that is
why people couldn'
t
plant any veggies as they Imported many dozen of products from other
countries
.
Secondly
even more importantly though there are potential solutions to
this
is an increase of industries from their government.
That is
to say that people can do work and to get their salary,
Consequently
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they might buy whatever they want and cheaper as made their
countries
. One particularly good example of
this
is one of the biggest area developing country Mongolia altered their political policy so
thus
states supported their inhabitant which means in 2016, amount of many manufactures had been built by their government. By way of conclusion, I once again restate my view that not only problem about can'
t
produce food products but
also
good support from their government.
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