There are some reasons why I would like to study in Korea. First of all, I like the Korean language itself, its structure and the way it sounds. Secondly, I am deeply interested in Korean culture. I have been

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Study plan There are some reasons why I would like to study in

Korea

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of all, I like the

Korean

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language

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itself, its structure and the way it sounds.

Secondly

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, I am deeply interested in

Korean

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culture. I have been communicating with

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both online and

in person

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, and they have made a very good impression on me. I

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enjoy every single detail in

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culture, even its cuisine. These factors inspired me to learn

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therefore

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I learned

Korean

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in two

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schools. Fortunately, I was lucky because I had very good teachers. Due to the pandemic, one of the

language

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schools stopped working but I still keep in touch with my teacher, who comes from

Korea

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and has been living in Georgia with her family for two years. I often call her on the phone and share both my achievements and difficulties in learning

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with her. When we talked

last

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time she told me that I shouldn't wait till the situation gets better but rather accept the situation and make the most of it. I still remember her words of encouragement, her caring attitude and warmth. I had only four lessons with my other teacher but she is so outgoing that we became

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right after the

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lesson. She helped me to prepare for the TOPIK exam. Now we meet as

friends

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every now and

then

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and discuss different topics. She knows that I am interested in

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cuisine;

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time we meet, she would like to give me jajangmyeon, which her family sent her from

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. I thought that most

Koreans

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were reserved but my teacher always hugs me when we meet. Now I think that

Koreans

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are very warm people and I'm sure I will get along with

Koreans

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well. In October I decided to take TOPIK (level 2) and I was able to obtain a high score (197 points).

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I continue learning

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on my own and I feel that my level of

Korean

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is significantly higher now. I got acquainted online with a few

Koreans

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and we became

friends

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. I have already prepared some gifts for a couple of my

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friends

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who

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I hope to meet when I come to

Korea

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. I have knitted two

woolen

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mufflers myself, bought a few traditional Georgian souvenirs and promised to bring them some Georgian snacks as well. Even though my

Korean

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friends

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have very busy lives, they are often contacting me and help me as much as they can. I know from my experience that the fastest way of learning a

language

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is communication with native speakers. The

Korean

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language

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training Program would give me an opportunity to both have high-quality

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classes and talk to native

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speakers in real life. Studying at your university will allow me to combine the experience I have gained so far with the new knowledge I will acquire. At the same time, I will definitely travel to different parts of

Korea

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. I will have direct contact with local people and get to know

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culture and traditions better. All of

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together will help me to understand what kind of experience

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tourists would like to have when

traveling

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to my country. The knowledge I will gain at your university and the connections I'm going to establish in

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will give me ample

opportunity

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in the future. After

graduation

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I will have a choice in my career. I could work as a

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interpreter or teach

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at a

language

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center

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or I could even run my own business,

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example

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a travel agency

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would specialize in working with

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tourists. As a travel agent, I would be delighted to offer

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tourists the most interesting experiences in my country. I would try to understand and meet the wishes of every individual tourist. I'm very enthusiastic about an opportunity to study at your university. I've made my decision. Now, I look forward to your

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?

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