There are some reasons why I would like to study in Korea. First of all, I like the Korean language itself, its structure and the way it sounds. Secondly, I am deeply interested in Korean culture. I have been

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Study plan There are some reasons why I would like to study in

Korea

First

of all, I like the

Korean

language

itself, its structure and the way it sounds.

Secondly

, I am deeply interested in

Korean

culture. I have been communicating with

Koreans

both online and

in person

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, and they have made a very good impression on me. I

also

enjoy every single detail in

Korean

culture, even its cuisine. These factors inspired me to learn

Korean

therefore

I learned

Korean

in two

language

schools. Fortunately, I was lucky because I had very good teachers. Due to the pandemic, one of the

language

schools stopped working but I still keep in touch with my teacher, who comes from

Korea

and has been living in Georgia with her family for two years. I often call her on the phone and share both my achievements and difficulties in learning

Korean

with her. When we talked

last

time she told me that I shouldn't wait till the situation gets better but rather accept the situation and make the most of it. I still remember her words of encouragement, her caring attitude and warmth. I had only four lessons with my other teacher but she is so outgoing that we became

friends

right after the

first

lesson. She helped me to prepare for the TOPIK exam. Now we meet as

friends

every now and

then

and discuss different topics. She knows that I am interested in

Korean

cuisine;

time we meet, she would like to give me jajangmyeon, which her family sent her from

Korea

. I thought that most

Koreans

were reserved but my teacher always hugs me when we meet. Now I think that

Koreans

are very warm people and I'm sure I will get along with

Koreans

well. In October I decided to take TOPIK (level 2) and I was able to obtain a high score (197 points).

Currently

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I continue learning

Korean

on my own and I feel that my level of

Korean

is significantly higher now. I got acquainted online with a few

Koreans

and we became

friends

. I have already prepared some gifts for a couple of my

Korean

friends

who

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I hope to meet when I come to

Korea

. I have knitted two

woolen

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mufflers myself, bought a few traditional Georgian souvenirs and promised to bring them some Georgian snacks as well. Even though my

Korean

friends

have very busy lives, they are often contacting me and help me as much as they can. I know from my experience that the fastest way of learning a

language

is communication with native speakers. The

Korean

language

training Program would give me an opportunity to both have high-quality

Korean

classes and talk to native

Korean

speakers in real life. Studying at your university will allow me to combine the experience I have gained so far with the new knowledge I will acquire. At the same time, I will definitely travel to different parts of

Korea

. I will have direct contact with local people and get to know

Korean

culture and traditions better. All of

this

together will help me to understand what kind of experience

Korean

tourists would like to have when

traveling

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to my country. The knowledge I will gain at your university and the connections I'm going to establish in

Korea

will give me ample

opportunity

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in the future. After

graduation

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I will have a choice in my career. I could work as a

Korean

interpreter or teach

Korean

at a

language

center

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or I could even run my own business,

for

example

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a travel agency

which

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would specialize in working with

Korean

tourists. As a travel agent, I would be delighted to offer

Korean

tourists the most interesting experiences in my country. I would try to understand and meet the wishes of every individual tourist. I'm very enthusiastic about an opportunity to study at your university. I've made my decision. Now, I look forward to your

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In a nutshell
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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