Students these day love to go to study abroad. Studying and living in a foreign country is a very beneficial thing to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons and examples from your own experience.

In modern life more and more students trying to receive education in foreign countries. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, because lots of states suggest
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programs
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more convenient for students.
Additionally
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educators, it is a good chance to broaden
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of knowledge and communication. Personally, I think that while our government increases fees for studying and the admission exams were made even harder in order to check actual knowledge, the foreign countries
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For instance
, in my hometown,
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proportion of the graduates make their best to go to Russian Federation. Two reasons affected
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their decisions;
first
, the light examination entrance and
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, cheaper average tuition per year, respectfully.
In addition
, from my point of view, studying abroad is one of the mesmerizing
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in students` life.
Moreover
, if a person uses that time consciously, it would influence to
further
life path. Because there are so many opportunities to get acquainted with different nationalities to make friends from all over the world. I think that education is not only about studying
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but,
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, it is about
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range of activities.
For example
, our country has its own history and culture and
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born people could understand each other.
However
, other cultures, views and understandings might be investigated by individuals in another part of the world. To conclude, the reason
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causing a movement for the various country apart from hometown is the gaps in
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system.
Furthermore
, if the government did not take measures, the number of native graduates would
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every year.
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