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In recent years more and more people are choosing e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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These days, using electronic
books
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instead
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 of printed
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 is becoming increasingly common among people .
Although
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 I think that
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 trend may have some obvious negative consequences , I believe that the advantages of the electronic
book
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 can outweigh their disadvantages . On the one hand , there are some reasons that why some people do not prefer to use an
e-reader
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 . The strongest reason is that
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 device may affect negatively the health of people because spending significant amounts of time can damage the eyesight of the users .
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 , everyone can download
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 and publish them regardless of their original author or publisher which can lead to piracy problems .
On the other hand
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 , despite these arguments , there are several valuable merits of
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 technological device to individuals .
Firstly
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, the price of an
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 remains cheaper than a printed
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 ,
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 , ten
books
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 cost the same amount of money as an
e-reader
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 which contains an unlimited number of
books
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 .
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 , the ease and convenience of reading e-
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 remain crucial merit of
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 gadget .
For example
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 , individuals become able to read
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 when travelling easily
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 of bringing a heavy paper
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 ,
also
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 they can listen to
book
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 via some options in
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 device when they are driving cars . In conclusion , despite that
e-reader
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 have some negative effects on humans , I believe that
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 technological invention remains the best choice for readers and the benefits that it brings exceed its drawbacks .
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