People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The fact that many people today use the
internet
to experience
other countries means that it is no longer as important to actually travel
to those nations. In my opinion, though travel
has its benefits, this
is largely true.
Firstly
, proponents of sightseeing often claim that real-life experience
trumps virtual experience
. Compare, for instance
, the recent Google Museum project which catalogues collections from famous museums in high-resolution photos available to anyone with internet
access. This
is no doubt a positive development but it pales in comparison to the experience
of walking through the Louvre and seeing the brushstrokes up close, going on a guided tour, and talking with other museum-goers. This
holds true for a variety of experiences that are enhanced by being physically present in the moment.
Although
there are good reasons to continue to travel
on occasion, the internet
allows people to access the majority of the experience
remotely. The most salient example of this
is the ubiquity of YouTube for internet
users around the world. A child from an impoverished background, who still has internet
access, probably cannot travel
to other countries but they can watch travel
documentaries, vlogs, and archived television shows that show cultures around the world. The makers of these videos not only bring their experience
but also
aggregate the most noteworthy events and individuals that even the most adventurous traveller would have difficulty finding the time to locate.
To conclude, travelling still plays a role in life but the internet
has largely replaced its primary importance in life. There will come a time when the virtual world too fully overcomes the physical but for the moment it is still beneficial.Submitted by Raven
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite