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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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In
this
 technological world, the use of printed
books
 or newspapers is becoming less common, and more
people
 are shifting towards online reading. There are two factors, that has played an important role in
this
 shift,
first
 is the cost of
this
 printed stuff, especially the original versions of
books
, and the
second
 is availability, which is limited to only a small segment of the population. In my opinion, these two factors will encourage more
people
 towards online reading. Let’s elaborate on these two factors. The cost of the printed stuff will play a very important role, it is indeed true in the case of
books
, especially the ones which
students
 use, most of the
students
 are unable to buy the original version of these, so
this
 is one reason why in future
people
 will prefer to do the online reading, especially the
students
instead
 of buying. Another factor is that printed material is limited and not easily available, whereas they can find an infinite number of resources online for their study with ease and their own comfort. In fact, today’s most of the universities all over the world have their reading stuff online, so that more and more
students
 can take the benefit.
For example
, When I was preparing for my IELTS exam, someone suggested reading the Official IELTS
books
 for preparation, but due to the very high price of the
book
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 I preferred to study online. To conclude, I would say that in the coming future more and more
people
 will shift to online reading, not only because it would be cheaper, but due to the trend of adopting o digital transformation ad
this
 would be inevitable for all those who concerned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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