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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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In
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 technological world, the use of printed
books
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 or newspapers is becoming less common, and more
people
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 are shifting towards online reading. There are two factors, that has played an important role in
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 shift,
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 is the cost of
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 printed stuff, especially the original versions of
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, and the
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 is availability, which is limited to only a small segment of the population. In my opinion, these two factors will encourage more
people
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 towards online reading. Let’s elaborate on these two factors. The cost of the printed stuff will play a very important role, it is indeed true in the case of
books
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, especially the ones which
students
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 use, most of the
students
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 are unable to buy the original version of these, so
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 is one reason why in future
people
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 will prefer to do the online reading, especially the
students
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instead
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 of buying. Another factor is that printed material is limited and not easily available, whereas they can find an infinite number of resources online for their study with ease and their own comfort. In fact, today’s most of the universities all over the world have their reading stuff online, so that more and more
students
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 can take the benefit.
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, When I was preparing for my IELTS exam, someone suggested reading the Official IELTS
books
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 for preparation, but due to the very high price of the
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 I preferred to study online. To conclude, I would say that in the coming future more and more
people
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 will shift to online reading, not only because it would be cheaper, but due to the trend of adopting o digital transformation ad
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 would be inevitable for all those who concerned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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