Some people believe that travelling is a memorable experience whereas others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that nowadays, travelling has become more and more popular among
people
. It is considered by many that travelling gives unforgettable memory, Use synonyms
whereas
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other
opine that Fix the agreement mistake
others
this
behaviour is Linking Words
completely
waste of time Change the word
complete
as well as
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money
. Use synonyms
This
essay will not only discuss both views but Linking Words
also
my opinion will be highlighted Linking Words
while
condoning.
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one
hand, there are some reasons why Correct article usage
the one
people
deem that travelling Use synonyms
which
is the best way to build Correct pronoun usage
apply
memorable
experience because it gives Correct article usage
a memorable
best
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the best
exploser
and Correct your spelling
experience
learns
about a different culture. So Verb problem
teaches
people
can get information related Use synonyms
culture
Fix the infinitive
to culture
as well as
know that Linking Words
place
which they travelledUse synonyms
.
As Change preposition
to.
result
, Correct article usage
a result
that is
very helpful Linking Words
create
an unforgettable experience. Wrong verb form
in creating
For example
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people
who are travelling Use synonyms
historical
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to historical
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place
. They have a chance to learn about the history of that Fix the agreement mistake
places
place
and they experience that Use synonyms
place
. Use synonyms
Moreover
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people
build more relationships with local Use synonyms
people
by travelling.
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On the other hand
, there are many causes why Linking Words
people
believe that travelling which not only is waste of time but Use synonyms
also
of Linking Words
money
. Travelling needs Use synonyms
fund
which is for booking hotel Fix the agreement mistake
funds
ticket
and other expenses where Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
people
spend Use synonyms
money
. So Use synonyms
people
who want travel some places. They need more Use synonyms
money
because those places are more expensive in terms of food and accommodation. As Use synonyms
result
, Correct article usage
a result
people
would spend Use synonyms
hefty
amount of Add an article
a hefty
money
on travelling Use synonyms
therefore
, they do not have not sufficient funds for retirement. Linking Words
For example
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People
would travel Use synonyms
such
as London and New York. The places need around 1 million INR which is huge for middle-class Linking Words
family
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families
people
think that travelling is not value for Use synonyms
money
.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
although
travelling requires more funds, it gives lifelong memory until death. I deem that travelling is the best way to learn about the culture and traditions.Linking Words
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