Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the

Museums

has an

entry

fee for

people

while others do not charge any

money

.

Although

charging fees from the visitors restricts the

entry

of some

people

, I believe that the benefits outweigh its drawbacks as charging

money

expands the funds of a

nation

. The key drawback of charging

money

from the visitors is that all

people

cannot enjoy the

Museum

visit.

This

is to say,

people

beyond the poverty line, who struggle even with meeting their fundamental needs

such

as two-time

meal

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, can never anticipate

of

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going to the

museum

because of its pet fees.

This

results in making them feel

disadvantage

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in their community.

For instance

,

science

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museum

in Jalandhar, in India, has been visited by the porch

people

only because of its expensive

entry

ticket.

However

, I believe that the

money

charged by the

museums

play a significant role in increasing the economy of a country. The

money

accumulated by the government through

museums

gradually develops the economy of a

nation

. The government gaining millions of monetary funds from the

museums

leads not only to the financial development of a

nation

but

also

causes

development

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of their

people

. The

money

collected through

museums

result

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in myriad endorsement to the higher authorities in providing job vacancies and retirement pensions to the citizens of a country.

For example

,

Indian

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historical

museum

has become the

center

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of attraction for

people

all over the world resulting in a major contribution

in

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the Indian economy.

Therefore

, I believe, a suitable

entry

fee should be charged by the

museums

from their visitors. In conclusion, despite the fact that

museum

admission fees can limit some

people

to not

enjoy

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the

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art and history, the

money

gained through

this

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entry

charges play a viable role in

economic

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development of a

nation

that is

far more valuable.