TASK-1 Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community, but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter – Express your feelings about missing the sports event – Tell them about your plans for next year – Explain how this sports event is useful.

Dear sir, I am
waiting
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this
letter to bring to your notice every year
your
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you
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organizes a sports event for a local crowd but
this
time your
miss
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itmiss
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. My name is XXY and I am for
working
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your LLC company And owners own a sports event for a local folk but
this
moment can do not it because whole individuals waiting for its items and they feel bad about it because communities part of every period
this
program. Sports events are more important to all because it is maintain your health and but at present time you do not start It while all folks
ready
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for It . I request you can you give me plans for
next
year about it because
this
type of course
most
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is most
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important to everyone it is very useful to all. I hope you notice my letter and reply
me
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soon and please give me any updates about it please call my number 3467889. You are
truly
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