Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals allow technology

companies

to access their personal

information

in exchange for entering

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software.

Although

this

consent can help

companies

grow their business, I believe that there are more drawbacks because receiving

this

sensitive

data

increases more

companies

responsibility. The main reason why technology organizations require

personal

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data

of users is to make

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better progress in their upcoming projects. They collect those

data

in order to evaluate the needs of their customers and how they can develop their new software in order to meet

those satisfaction

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. The more they know about their target users, the more successful

in

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their sales.

For example

, in Thailand, before entering

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application, you have to provide your name and your identity document.

This

information

is sent directly to the organization and only a few months, there is a launch of new software created for young adults which are the majority of their customers.

As a result

,

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new products make the highest sales rate.

However

, I believe

this

is not worth

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because the drawbacks of keeping sensitive

information

are more severe. Allowing others to access personal

data

brings more burden to

companies

because they have to take full responsibility

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those

information

security since receiving it from their users. If the

information

is being sent accidentally to

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person or being misused, it will harm the reputation of the company.

Moreover

, in some cases,

this

will lead to criminal charges.

For instance

, in Thailand, offenders confess that they often use leaked sensitive

information

to commit

frauds

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. In conclusion, even though

companies

can use personal

data

as a tool for increasing their sales, they are responsible for the security of

those sensitive

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information

which is

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for them. For these reasons the negatives far outnumber the positives.