Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the necessity of wildlife parks.

While

some hold a strong view that all kinds of

zoos

are brutal and

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should be restricted, the opposite makes a statement that zoological gardens do wonders for protecting wildlife

animals

.

While

the latter is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the former. Without a shadow of a doubt, it is necessary to prohibit

zoos

which are vicious to

animals

. It is undeniable to note that most

zoos

in the world are for business purposes only.

Therefore

, they will not take

animals

’ lives and health into

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consideration if they relate to money matters.

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zoological destination can be named as a deplorable example.

This

zoo is convicted to torture and bring a three years old elephant named Dumbo to death. They forced that small animal to work hours to hours to produce riding elephant service and when he did not want to, the zookeeper

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him with a stick in front of the tourists.

Therefore

,

zoos

are cruel and they do nothing

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wildlife conservation.

While

the fact that

zoos

are inhumane and should be banned is widely acknowledged, it is unfair

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not

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other kinds of

zoos

. There are myriad types of

zoos

in the world and not all of them act as a disturbance to

animals

’ lives.

For instance

, preservation parks produce accommodation and food for threatened

animals

.

Moreover

, they even admit

animals

in critical condition,

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them medical

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along with

special care in order to send them back to nature.

Thus

, some types of

zoos

can act as a precursor to save wild

animals

. In conclusion,

while

zoological sites do bring

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influence to preservation projects, it is undeniable to state that

zoos

are mostly fierce and it is essential to bring them down.