The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Forton Valley City from 2000 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Forton Valley City from 2000 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate some radical and mild changes
of
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a city namely Forton Valley between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, there were no alterations regarding size and it sprang up more functional areas after a decade. As for the western
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Daisy
road
, farmland and dairy farms situated
next
to each other in 2000 were replaced.
While
the former was transformed into a playground, the latter was the relocation of KG school with a minimal toy store in the northeast corner of which. Notably, the previous location of KG school in the East of the area
subsequently
gave its place
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a
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Forton University in the
next
decade. With regard to the east side of Daisy
road
, a new public library was erected at the removal of a city hall. Meanwhile, to the south of which, the car park area was expanded to double in size with a view to providing more parking spaces for residents. Adjacent to the car park, an old park was demolished to be substituted by a Versity Cafe. After a decade, a shopping centre and a T-
road
which contained both Sheffield
road
and Daisy
Road
still unperturbed.
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