Some people believe that international free-car days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are several other ways that are more effective: Discuss both views & give your own opinion.

Increasing

air

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pollution

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becomes a hot topic of every discussion forum in the world. To

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the

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pollution

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, some

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support that the free car days are the significant

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to minimise

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issue, while another group of thinkers state that there are several other ways

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are promote electric vehicles and new effective mode of public

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might decrease the

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think in the same manner and support the

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view. On the one hand, the international free-car days become a new

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in the global market to prevent

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atmosphere. To add to

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, the government select few days in the year to celebrate

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,

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, most countries' citizens

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follow the guidelines from the government like no

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of fuel

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, maximum

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of public

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and so on in order to give their contribution.

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, Holland is the country that started

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for the very

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time and

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it became world popular,

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, a recent study on

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showed that

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is for a very short time in the year

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, it is not a far effective

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to

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pollution

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. On the other side, there are many other effective ways to handle

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problem.

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and foremost, increasing awareness towards electric vehicles' merits inspire individuals to start using EV

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instead

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of fuel

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. New Zealand Ministry of

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,

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, recently announced new subsidy schemes on purchasing new EV

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in place to reduce carbon footprints.

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is what encouraged kiwi

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to

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electric

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over fuel

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.

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, many

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argue that lack of public

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facilities convinces them to

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their personal

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for travelling.

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, if the government make public

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a much effective

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to travel,

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people

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might stop using their

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.

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, the above mentioned two methods are for the long term to

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air

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pollution

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. In conclusion, the essay discussed that the international free car day is not an effective

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to

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. But, promoting the pros of EV

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and

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improving

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public

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facilities may lead the world to reduce

air

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pollution

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at the global level.