Some people believe that international free-car days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are several other ways that are more effective: Discuss both views & give your own opinion.

Increasing

air

pollution

becomes a hot topic of every discussion forum in the world. To

control

the

air

pollution

, some

people

support that the free car days are the significant

way

to minimise

this

issue, while another group of thinkers state that there are several other ways

such

are promote electric vehicles and new effective mode of public

transport

might decrease the

pollution

. I

also

think in the same manner and support the

second

view. On the one hand, the international free-car days become a new

trend

in the global market to prevent

air

atmosphere. To add to

this

, the government select few days in the year to celebrate

this

trend

,

moreover

, most countries' citizens

also

follow the guidelines from the government like no

use

of fuel

cars

, maximum

use

of public

transport

and so on in order to give their contribution.

For instance

, Holland is the country that started

this

trend

for the very

first

time and

then

it became world popular,

However

, a recent study on

this

showed that

this

trend

is for a very short time in the year

therefore

, it is not a far effective

way

to

control

pollution

. On the other side, there are many other effective ways to handle

this

problem.

First

and foremost, increasing awareness towards electric vehicles' merits inspire individuals to start using EV

cars

instead

of fuel

cars

. New Zealand Ministry of

Transport

,

for example

, recently announced new subsidy schemes on purchasing new EV

cars

in place to reduce carbon footprints.

This

is what encouraged kiwi

people

to

use

electric

cars

over fuel

cars

.

However

, many

people

argue that lack of public

transport

facilities convinces them to

use

their personal

cars

for travelling.

Therefore

, if the government make public

transport

a much effective

way

to travel,

then

people

might stop using their

cars

.

Finally

, the above mentioned two methods are for the long term to

control

air

pollution

. In conclusion, the essay discussed that the international free car day is not an effective

way

to

control

. But, promoting the pros of EV

cars

and

by

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improving

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,improving

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public

transport

facilities may lead the world to reduce

air

pollution

at the global level.