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summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The table shows the estimated read and
write
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 rates for men and women in five
region
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regions
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 Africa, the Americas, Asia, Europe and
Ocenia
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Oceania
 between 2000 and 2004, the world literacy rates
also
 shows in the same years. According to the table, Europe has
highest
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 literate level
compare
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than
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other region
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another region
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, there is
no
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 much gender literate difference which is
alomost
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almost
 99% in
both
. The
americas
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 and
Ocenia
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Oceania
both
has
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 over 93% of
read
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reading
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 and write in overall and there is no huge
differnce
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difference
 between male and female.
By contrast
, Asia and Africa
both
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minimum
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a minimum
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 amount of literate rate
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than
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 other regions
over all
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overall
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 79% and 62% respectively. Africa has female literacy rates low than
male
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the male
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 average
alomost
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almost
 54% and 72% respectively. The world read and write average rate has almost 82%,
male
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the male
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 has more literate level than female 87% and 77% respectively,
this
 difference 10% increased between
both
 gender.
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