In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles ourweigh the disadvantages?

In years to come, whole
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including
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automobiles, public
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and trucks will be operated without drivers.
People
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will use them for a reason, as a
passanger
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passenger
. There are numerous benefits and drawbacks of
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phenomenon. I believe, autopilot system of vehicles
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benefitial
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beneficial
for us. In
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essay, l will look into both pros and cons of
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condition. Let's begin by looking at
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of
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human-free
drive. Vehicles become much safer as
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do not operate them. Because
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can
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control
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driving cars because of state of being drunk or ill.
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incidents like stealing the
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by shooting the driver will be less
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if
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is operated automatically.
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, traffic
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will be
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less than now. Transport producers feature vehicles with
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a navigation
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system, which helps to detect traffic jam routes and use possible
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congestion-free
road
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instead
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.
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can improve common congestion issues.
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,autonomous transports perfectly follow
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traffic
rules.
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may not drive carefully as artificial
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intelligence
do
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. It can reduce the number of car accidents on the road.
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,
autopilot
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the autopilot
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system may be the reason for
arising some problems
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some problems arising
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.
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, in big urban areas
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implementing human-free
drive may cause a massive job loss.
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, there is still
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misbelief
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artificial
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intelligence
as some
people
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consider that it lacks of ability
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judgements
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.
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, the benefits of autopilot driving are superior to its drawbacks. It has
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impact on
people
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's health and life. Its cons can be dissolved with the help of technology.

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Task
Be clear in one view at the start. Say if you are for or against driverless cars.
Structure
Make one idea in each paragraph. Use 'first', 'also', 'but' to link ideas.
Language
Fix the grammar and spelling. Use short, simple form and easy tense.
Content
Use good examples. Avoid facts that are not right or are not easy to prove. Keep ideas on topic.
Strength
The essay shows a real effort to talk about driverless cars.
Strength
There are some good ideas on safety and how flow of road can be better.
Strength
There is a clear end that sums up the view.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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