Introduction
In the present world, crime rates are constantly on the rise. Underfunded areas and schools are two major reasons for
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Thus
, investing more money in these regions, as well as establishing a sensibilization campaign could help in reducing the amount of misconduct.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
I believe that one of the biggest causes of high crime numbers is poverty. For many, by growing up in places where conditions are not suitable for living they feel abandoned by society.
This
often leads to psychological problems like anger which tend to be expressed by committing crimes. Another reason is a poor education system. Linking Words
As a result
, students who drop school tend to prove themselves by joining gangs that could be used by criminals as drug dealers. Linking Words
For instance
, the percentage of children who drop school is 4 times more in underdeveloped areas than in places considered luxurious.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
Therefore
, the solution is to help these communities by building adequate infrastructures Linking Words
such
as good schools and an acceptable transport system. Linking Words
In addition
, educating young people and showing them that they have the potential to lead their community to peace and prosperity. The story of Rwanda is a good example of the effect of schools in putting the idea of building nations starts with the foundation.Linking Words
Conclusion
To summarise, unprivileged communities with poor education programs often leads to high crime rates.
Consequently
, by putting more public money into Linking Words
such
regions, society could help them succeed in their lives which in turn influence people's behaviour to become more civil. after Linking Words
this
thorough analysis it is predicted that with the growing gap between social classes, the amount of criminal actions is going to be higher in the future.Linking Words