Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As per the specialist, it has been said that during elementary education a youngster should learn an external
language
in place of high school. In my opinion, the negative impact exceeds the positive impact.
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a different dialect can disbenefits the
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background of a child.
To begin
with the drawbacks,
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of a foreign expression will overload the academic studies of a student which may lead to confusion among their own
language
.
For example
, if an individual is given
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a
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various
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to learn at
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early age,
then
he or she may not be able to coup up their mother tongue due
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complication
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of different words can occur.
Additionally
, it may cause a lack of time management among the primary children’s as most of the time will
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by the studies and due to
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least amount of time will be free for other activities.
However
, positive aspects of
this
trend can help a child with their future goals.
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about different
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is an additional point for an individual which may
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them in their life.
For instance
, in our
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English is a subject which was introduced a while ago, so from elementary school onwards English was kept as an additional
language
and it has helped a considerable number of students in their respective lives. To conclude,
although
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of a foreign expression is beneficial in terms of future aspects,
but
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the drawbacks outweigh the advantages as it may cause
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uncertainty in
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process of a child.
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  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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