Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do
Dear David,
I hope you are doing well. I am delighted that your children will be at my home. I am going to prepare a separate room for them.
To begin
with, it would be my honour if your kids would come to my apartment. I strongly wait for their arrival. I think we will be able to do a lot of enjoyable activities.
Fortunately, I have enough spare time, since I am on holiday. So, from Saturday until Friday, we can coordinate their plan. However
, I assume that the 20th of October would be the best date. Please inform me of your exact time.
I am willing to announce to you that we will be able to visit a historic castle close to my flat. Additionally
, I will prepare traditional foods. As I know, they like to test different tastes.
I am eagerly looking forward to hearing your response.
Best Regards,
AliSubmitted by ali.pazoki72 on
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task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task clearly. Adding a bit more detail about the activities planned for the children could enhance the completeness of your response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph distinctly focuses on a single idea. For instance, separating the logistics of the visit and the planned activities can make the letter more coherent.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are both warm and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You have maintained a friendly and enthusiastic tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for this context.