In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a popular hobby of many

people

. It i

s argue

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that going on holiday in d

ometic

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Dometic

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will be trendy. In my opinion, I disagree with

this

statement, and I believe that

people

will choose abroad journeys for their vacations.

Firstly

, there are many interesting factors of

travel

abroad which affect v

isitter's

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visitor's

visiter's

destinations.

For example

, some breathtaking views of Korea have been expressed in the movie "Hometown cha cha cha", a top movie on Netflix in 2021, leading Vietnamese audiences w

ant

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to visit the Busan beach to feel the relaxing picturesque villages like

this

film.

Furthermore

, because of the d

eveleped

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developed

developer

of social platforms

such

as Facebook, I

nstargram,

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Instagram

people

can see a lot of reviews, pictures and blogs about t

he a

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ttractive places in the world.

As a result

, they will be curious and want to explore t

he o

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ther countries with various beautiful scenes.

Secondly

, the conditions to

travel

abroad are reasonable w

ith

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humans.

For instance

, many international flights are becoming cheaper and more c

onvenience

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than t

he

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past.

Therefore

, tourists could select the most suitable flight for their expenses.

Additionally

, they

also

can access a ton of information through the

travel

agents. These companies provide the a

fforable

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affordable

travel

packages including a

ccommomdation,

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accommodation

transportation and tours in the attractive places which make tourists feel easier to go. A

s

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my experience,

last

summer, my mother and I visited Thailand by an all-in package tour, we s

hown

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around many sightseeings with a tour guide with a

prices

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prices

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as cheap as a trip to Da nang, a p

opurlar

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popular

holiday place in Vietnam. To conclude, I believe that t

he

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large number of information and the favourable conditions to go h

oliday

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on holiday

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on foreign will make

people

choose to visit other countries rather than their own country.