In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a popular hobby of many
people
. It i
s argue
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that going on holiday in d
ometic
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will be trendy. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
statement, and I believe that
people
will choose abroad journeys for their vacations.
Firstly
, there are many interesting factors of
travel
abroad which affect v
isitter's
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visitor's
visiter's
destinations.
For example
, some breathtaking views of Korea have been expressed in the movie "Hometown cha cha cha", a top movie on Netflix in 2021, leading Vietnamese audiences w
ant
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to visit the Busan beach to feel the relaxing picturesque villages like
this
film.
Furthermore
, because of the d
eveleped
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developed
developer
of social platforms
such
as Facebook, I
nstargram,
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Instagram
people
can see a lot of reviews, pictures and blogs about t
he a
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apply
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ttractive places in the world.
As a result
, they will be curious and want to explore t
he o
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ther countries with various beautiful scenes.
Secondly
, the conditions to
travel
abroad are reasonable w
ith
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humans.
For instance
, many international flights are becoming cheaper and more c
onvenience
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than t
he
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past.
Therefore
, tourists could select the most suitable flight for their expenses.
Additionally
, they
also
can access a ton of information through the
travel
agents. These companies provide the a
fforable
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affordable
travel
packages including a
ccommomdation,
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accommodation
transportation and tours in the attractive places which make tourists feel easier to go. A
s
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my experience,
last
summer, my mother and I visited Thailand by an all-in package tour, we s
hown
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around many sightseeings with a tour guide with a
prices
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as cheap as a trip to Da nang, a p
opurlar
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popular
holiday place in Vietnam. To conclude, I believe that t
he
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large number of information and the favourable conditions to go h
oliday
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on holiday
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on foreign will make
people
choose to visit other countries rather than their own country.
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