Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a widely-held belief that the simplicity of our lives has been impacted by technological advances, especially during the

last

century, and our lifestyle turned into a more complicated one. Some

believe

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in solving

this

matter by living a more simple

life

without the

use

of

technology

. I do not agree with

this

notion due to the rationale which will be explained in

this

essay.

Technology

have

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offered a host of virtues in our lifestyles.

Firstly

, the most positive aspect may be that the advances in

technology

have led to many breakthroughs in different medical fields. These discoveries have led to

development

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the development

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of diverse treatment ways of disparate diseases and a more straightforward

life

for patients and their families substantially.

For instance

, many diseases that had required hospitalization to be managed nowadays can be controlled by oral medications daily at

patient’s

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home, which was not possible without the

use

of

technology

.

Moreover

, by the leading-edge

technology

, people can have long-distance communication with each other with their devices through voice or video calls, which leads to an effortless way of contacting under special circumstances.

For example

, during the Covid-19 crisis and the lockdown, people could do teleworking and actively participate in their working meetings online from their houses. Admittedly, those who agree with

omission

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the omission

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of

technology

from

life

to live in a simpler way may have adapted to the conventional ways of

life

and

afraid

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are afraid

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of changing their habits. An alternative hypothesis may be that they do not have the know-how to

use

the

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modern

technology

,

thus

they refuse to

use

it.

However

, not using

technology

in today’s modern world may lead to

an

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isolation from the world around us and more significant issues in our lives. To conclude, it appears that advances in

technology

have influenced our lives in a positive way and

make

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living conditions more bearable for us,

such

as in disease conditions or in the lockdowns due to them.

Nevertheless

, there are always people who cannot or do not want to adapt to new transformations.