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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that nowadays multination
companies
 played an important role in our
life
 especially for their products, some said it will be seriously harmed to our
life
's
quality
. The following paragraph will be discussing my agreement with
this
 statement,
therefore
 the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
 with, I believe that the
first
 thing that will be harmed to our
life
 is the
quality
 of their product because the
companies
 can make their products with low
quality
 for us to use and we still need to use it due to that we need it,
this
 will cost money from us and we cannot prevent it and complaint the
companies
.
Secondly
, they can harvest profits from us by increasing prices and the authority cannot do anything on them
such
 as increasing taxes, or
make
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 a contact if they want to make a business in the
country
.
Moreover
, in the financial field, the money that we use to buy their product will go out of the
country
 which affects the
country
's economy that has many consequences to our
quality
 of
life
.
This
 is
also
 a sign that our
country
 cannot compete in the development area because even make products that are crucial for people in the
country
, we still cannot develop.
This
 will lead to being a sub development
country
, and
this
country
 will get leech from other multinational
companies
 to come and gain profits from our people, but we cannot do anything to stop them. To summarise, I believe that the former and latter paragraphs are reasons to support
this
 statement because of negative feedbacks that surely come from the people in the
country
.
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