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Should government funding be spent on education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

#government #education #healthcare #system
It is undeniable that health nation's greatest asset. Due to
this
 important and precious ,
asset
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 we have enough motivation to seek personal fulfilment; Broadening one's knowledge and curiosity is another human's gift that has helped to make growth easier. In
this
 essay, I will examine more details and express my own take on the matter.
First
 and foremost,wellness has an important impact on each person's life.These days, many countries have appreciated the value of health and they are trying to provide more health services as they can. Why? Because of the big ,
impact
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 that wellbeing has on human's life. To put it simply,when even somebody has been off-colour, he or she loses the energy and motivation to complete their job. So they cannot work as proper as they can and may feel incompetent.
Besides
, they
also
 have to pay a fortune for prescription charges, which some people cannot afford.
Next
, it is an obvious fact that people are in search of trends and new things in life. So it is easy to expect that without any proper investment in educational sectors, the government cannot meet their need.
This
 unfortunately can lead to distress and frustration in society as well as brain drain to other rival lands. If the state does not investigate in
such
 segments, it will later suffer from the lack of sufficient and proper staff with intimate knowledge.
On the other hand
,conditions in different communities are different.Some societies are in danger of war and some security issues.So they mostly have to invest in military and army sections, in order to provide protection for their people.
For instance
, if a state is in a war situation, it will absolutely invest as much money as it can in tackling
this
 problem. To sum up,
although
 it is important to fund on educational and healthcare system, it
also
 depends on the country that we are analysing. In my idea, I believe that the most responsibility lies with the different governments to come to an alignment.So they all can focus on other prominent subjects
as a result
.
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