In some countries, there are not enough medical or educational facilities in rural areas. Therefore, some people believe newly graduated teachers and doctors should be sent to work in rural areas for some time. Others think that people should be free to choose where they work after graduation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, in some ,countries we can observe a lack of doctors and teachers in rural areas. So, according to some, it is a great idea to send graduates there and obligate them to
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for a few months or years. While others disagree and state that everybody has a right to choose where to job. I think that governments should not control newly graduated Replace the word
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wherever they want to.
To start with, some people believe that young specialists can increase the quality of medicine and teaching in rural areas or villages. Wrong verb form
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have to give back their duty, if they had been studying on a governmental basis and did not pay for their schooling. Fix the agreement mistake
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For example
, during the Soviet times, students after their graduation were sent to different cities, where they were working for 3 years. Often students stayed there even longer to continue the development of rural schools or hospitals. Besides
, discipline was free for everyone, so alumni felt owed to help the government.
On the other hand
, others say that students must be free to choose their workplace, salary and the region of the country. Furthermore
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spent many years preparing to become ones and spent a lot of money on their learning, so they have to be allowed to select. Fix the agreement mistake
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For instance
, wages of workers are higher in Moscow than in over regions, as well as the equipment here is much better. It is not surprising that new organization
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, only 25% of bachelor programs are sponsored by the government of Russia. Thus
, most graduates do not have any moral debt.
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, it is not democratic to forcedly send citizens anywhere.Submitted by tatianaraysan2002 on
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