Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of environment, which was always debatable how to save
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one
of the best ways to solve
this
problem is to
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the cost of fuels for cars and other transport. I completely disaccord with the statement
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. On
one
hand, there are myriad reasons why
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disagree with the statement but the
first
and foremost
one
is that price of fuels occurs
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imbalance
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in
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society
because
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price of fuels afford only
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people
, whereas
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public cannot afford
this
uels
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fuels
so it is not possible that usage of fuel reducing by
this
way.
Moreover
, civilians should focus on
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such
as e-
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bike
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as well as public transport. By
this
environment is more effective to protect them.
As a result
, long term results can be attained. Another worth considering
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to improve our
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which is the best way is using
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friendly
fules
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files
fuels
fumes
of automobiles. It is useful for reducing not only reducing toxic air but
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of life.
Therefore
,
people
can live a long life without any hustle.
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,
people
can use
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like CNG and LPG
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of automobiles
are consider
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as
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an eco-friendly
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fules
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files
fuels
fuel
. To conclude, according to the argument
one
can reach a conclusion I increasing
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fuels
price is not worth it to save environmental
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problems
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use
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way like e-vehicles.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental preservation
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Green technologies
  • Alternative energy sources
  • Renewable energy
  • Fuel-efficient vehicles
  • Electric vehicles (EVs)
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic impact
  • Consumer behavior
  • Disproportionate effect
  • Government subsidies
  • Comprehensive policies
  • Cost-effective solutions
  • Carbon footprint reduction
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