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Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #internet #accessibility #libraries
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Many individuals think
libraries
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 do not have an essential role anymore, due to wide accessibility to the
internet
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 around the world. I completely agree with
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 belief and I think we can substitute
libraries
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 with the
internet
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 as in
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 essay I want to share my reasons.
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 and foremost, information accessibility on the
internet
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 is far faster than in
libraries
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. Nowadays almost every individual all over the world even in remote areas can search for whatever they want with a click on the
internet
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 which may take less than a
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. But sometimes they have to go on a long trip to find a library in which they find a book to fulfil their demands. Take into consideration, habitants of rural areas who do not contain paper-
books
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 near their houses, while they can find answers to their questions by using the
internet
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 at their convenience.
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,
libraries
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 are not environment-friendly.
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 to say, for publishing every paper-
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 at least one tree is cut down and one source of pure oxygen is lost. Considering the number of paper
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 published every year, we can see how far we damage Mother Nature while reading those
books
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 on the
internet
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 will reduce
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 harm to its minimum. Since we can find any references we need on the
internet
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, I think there is no essential need for
libraries
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 full of printed
books
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 anymore. Some may argue that since
books
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 in the
libraries
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 are reviewed by several authors, they are more reliable references than the
internet
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 contents. They believe that anyone can write an online content essay on the
internet
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 and publish it.
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, I think everyone should learn to search in the best-indexed sites on the
internet
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 like CNN, BBC, governmental websites, and by doing so the best up-to-date information is there to be learnt. To conclude I totally believe that
libraries
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 are not necessary for our modern lives full of technologies, which able us to search and read on the
internet
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 by our cellphones and reduce the speed of deforestation.
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