In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

In the UK, we see hundreds of senior citizens being put into nursing

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a community of other old people and have nurses to look after them.

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often occurs as the older individual's family may not have the time nor the facilities to adequately

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for them.

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, these nursing

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require similar facilities and resources to

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for these older

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that often cost a lot of money.

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is why sometimes governments have to pay for

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. Yet, there exists a debate on whether it is the

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or the family's duty to pay for these nursing

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. Personally, I believe that the cost should be incurred by the family considering that they have a personal obligation to look after and ensure the efficient

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of their older family member. We see that, most often than not, these older family members spent a significant time within their more youthful days looking after and caring for the rest of their family.

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, as a grandmother,

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individual would have taken the

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and effort to raise not only their children but their grandchildren as well. Considering the service and time these older

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dedicated towards the rest of their family, it is only right that these

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should take on the burden of paying for their

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in these nursing

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, as it is a simple way of showing their gratitude towards them and all they have done.

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, when these

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take on the obligation of incurring

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cost,

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ensures that these older

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receive adequate and efficient

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within these nursing

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. How does

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happen?

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the

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may have the funds to pay for

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, they have no personal connection or obligation towards these older

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. They are simply another citizen and another bill to pay.

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means that even if they do provide adequate funding for these nursing

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, the

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is unlikely to look into the maintenance aspects or fund additional costs,

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as renovation, that these places may require.

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leads to older

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not being able to receive the best

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that they deserve.

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,

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do have a personal connection to these older

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as they are

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their own flesh and blood, which means they are more likely to look into other aspects of

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within these nursing

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and may even be willing to fund additional costs because they are aware that their older family member will benefit

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, when

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pay for

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it allows for more efficient and well-funded nursing

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, allowing for better

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for these older

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. In conclusion, I think that it is best that

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rather than the

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pay for their older family member's

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within these nursing

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, as it allows for better functioning nursing

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and overall better

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for these senior

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