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Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed, than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

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These days,everything
have
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 changed
such
 as the approach
of
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to
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 life and
work
.A majority of
people
 tend
ro
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to
work
 for
own
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their own
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instead
 of
work
 for someone or
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special
speciall
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a speciall
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 official.In
this
 essay,
i
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 will explore some substantial reasons and find out some pros and cons. In my
opnion
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opinion
,the significant and main factor is freedom.the vast majority of
people
 like to be free in
workplace
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the workplace
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.Some organizations have many
strick
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strict
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 regulations so
employee
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employees
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 prefer to be self-employed because they can have
own
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their own
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 rules.
For instance
,you consider that you can go to
the
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work
 whenever you
want
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won't
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 like in the early morning, in the afternoon and etc ,
also
 somedays
people
 are bored or need some hours to rest or
spending
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spend
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 time with relatives or friends.In
this
situation
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people
 can readily change their worktime.
Second
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 reason is
that self-employed
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that self-employed person
those self-employed people
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people
responsible
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are responsible
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 for their income.I mean they can
work
 hard and get lots of money or they can be carefree
person
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people
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,as result low money would be earned.
for example
, employees always get
same
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the same
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 salaries,unless they can get
promotion
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a promotion
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 from
boss
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the boss
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 while self-employed
people
 do not have
steady
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a steady
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 income.They can get higher money day by day.
However
,being self-employed,
people
 face 
with
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apply
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some drawbacks.As
i
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I
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 mentioned
people
 are totally responsible for income or clerks.If they went bankrupt,lots of damages would appear for these
people
 while if they be a clerk,they can get
salary
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a salary
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 from
insurnance
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insurance
.
In addition
,
people
 should manage their
work
 and organization,so they might be too busy and snowe with
dozand
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dozens
 of paperwork. In conclusion,self-employed
working
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 has both advantages and disadvantages.It
depend
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 on
people
's abilities
such
 as being good at
managment
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management
managing
 and etc.I choose to be self_employed because
i
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I
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 think that
i
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 can control my organization
on
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in
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 the best way.
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