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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

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The
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 plays a valuable role in some countries of the world. While it is preferable that local products are reliable more than
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 into a territory for a sale, I admit that goods are one of the main facilities to exchange culture and trade over the globe.
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 of all, a lot of people believe that a huge amount of imported foods are being grown artificially. The reason for
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this
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these
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 natural goods
are
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 not enough for the sale
to
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abroad.
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, unnatural products whet the appetite because the views of them attract people quickly. That's why
,
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 not everyone wants to eat the foods that are harvested only in their own homelands.
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 of all, export and
import
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 are the best way to improve
the
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marketing.
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, if you are
young
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 businessman
in
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producing some kind of edibles, you will be a supporter of extending the production undoubtedly.
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, the
import
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 helps you in terms of that.
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, human beings have
a
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 possibility to buy an
avacado
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avocado
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 or mango because of the importer in spite of living in the cold edges of the world. In conclusion, the
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 has an essential value for some places of the earth.
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, it is considered that most imported foods are not available for
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health.
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, they support the revaluation of
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taste and marketing over the world.
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