A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * give details of the course you took at the University * explain why you recommend the University * give some advice about how to apply

Dear Peter, Hope everything is going well. It is a pleasure to hear that you are planning to start a degree program

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is a four-year course including a one-year industrial training programme. The

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two years are common to all students and you have to choose specific areas as per your preferred areas

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as Banking , Management, Marketing , Human resource. The best-performed student will be selected to the lecture panel of the academy.

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university is the most recognized college in our country and for the

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ten ,years it is among the top thousand universities in the world. Due to ,that there is a high recognize in job market student who is followed courses in here.

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highly recommended

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academy for your studies. When

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apply the causes do it online using the university website especially before the cut-off date and do not forget to attach your all certificate with the application. All the best for your studies, Best regards James Bond

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Dec 14, 2021

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