You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir/madam My name is Jason, as one of the candidates to attend the annual
conference
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on
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quarter.
Information
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such
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as schedules and costs are not provided on the website, so I am writing
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letter for some specific detail regards the upcoming
conference
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.
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, I would like to know the schedule of
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annual meeting and the event arrangement for each day.
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, I could not find any
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about the cost, which is the part I have been concerned about most. Our manager told us that all the relevant costs
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as the fee of participation and accommodation will be covered by the
conference
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organizer.
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, there is no
such
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information
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shown on the event website. I feel excited and honoured to be invited to
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annual
conference
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, I expect
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would be an unforgettable journey for me; I am sure that I could gain a lot of
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through it. Please include
information
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to address my concerns, thanks. Yours faithfully, Jason
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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