In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is a well-known fact that many states do not allow smoking in public facilities and punish people with a fine for violation of
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ban.
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why
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are forced to get out of
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to find a place to smoke. I strongly disagree with
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point of view as I believe that owners and employers of
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premises have to organise single rooms for
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within
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. It is clear that public smoking has prohibited in all developed countries, and
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is the law.
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, in my opinion, it is not correct due to the subsequent factors.
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of all, there are many
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in our society, so it is almost impossible to organize many smoking areas outside
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.
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, in many countries, especially in the big cities, the land is quite expensive.
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is not profitable as it increases the expenses for both landlords and tenants.
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, if people often leave their workplaces, it can lead to direct losses of work time, and
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different problems in a business process may occur. It means that many important phone calls can be missed, so multiple potential deals will not be cut. I suppose
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acceptable for big companies.
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,
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intense movement of stuff creates a big load for engineering systems of
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, notably on lifts, which will be crowded because people will go permanently up and down to smoke outside. To sum up, I would argue that all new public
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should have smoking rooms on each floor, especially the high-storey ones. These places have to be equipped with adequate ventilation and reliable fire alarm.
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,
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will move within the borders of their work area, not creating tight traffic inside
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and minimising idle time. I would
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recommend employers strictly regulate the time of smoking breaks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • respiratory problems
  • cardiovascular disease
  • clean air
  • public health
  • hospital admissions
  • economic benefits
  • smoking cessation
  • cultural shift
  • healthcare costs
  • smoke-free laws
  • enforcement
  • designated smoking areas
  • compliance
  • social attitudes
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