Some people think that criminal behavior has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is extremely hard to distinguish a
crime
originated by genetic issue or it
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by someone to commit the
crime
. It depends on
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situation.
A poverty
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and
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unemployment led someone to commit
crime
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a crime
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on purpose. In my view, if
crime
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the crime
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is done on purpose so that we need to consider
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causes
of
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the suspect
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.
Therefore
, a detective obtains the root
causes
of
crime
. I hope that we can find some answers
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from that root
causes
. It can tell us every detail of
crime
that
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why, when, and how. Certainly, we need to talk about genetic
causes
, a police investigation team needs to discover
parent’s
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criminal records of
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a suspect
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suspect
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suspects
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.
For example
, a group of people arranged bank robbery. In
this
case, a police department will analyze
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issues of possible suspects.
However
, we should remember that it is quite hard to determine criminal
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has genetic
causes
. I agree that lack of money and job loss
are
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affecting some people to commit a
crime
. if it is done randomly, perhaps we do not need to talk about genetic
causes
. I suppose that authorities made decisions based on fact and evidence which can tell us what we should do
in
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next
.
For instance
:
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person
stolen
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mobile
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phone from
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in
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. In
this
case, everything was clear that the purpose and the reason. I think that an investigation team will analyze
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the genetic
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causes
of
this
crime
and they will update related information on
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the database
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. In my opinion, there is a lot of
crime
incidents recorded in the police department every day. The Ministry of Justice should make a deep analysis of criminal
behavior
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and its relations. According to the Research report of Mongolian National University, extremely serious crimes
commit
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by someone who has genetic
causes
of criminal
behavior
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. To sum up, I strongly believe that
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criminal
behavior
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has genetic
causes
.
Also
, recent studies and law enforcement agencies have confirmed
this
.
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