Some people think that criminal behavior has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is extremely hard to distinguish a
crime
originated by genetic issue or it leaded
by someone to commit the Correct your spelling
led
crime
. It depends on real
situation. Add an article
the real
a real
A poverty
and Remove the article
Poverty
an
unemployment led someone to commit Remove the article
apply
crime
on purpose.
In my view, if Add an article
a crime
the crime
crime
is done on purpose so that we need to consider Add an article
the crime
a crime
genetic
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the genetic
causes
of suspect
. Add an article
the suspect
a suspect
Therefore
, a detective obtains the root causes
of crime
. I hope that we can find some answers of
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to
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the question
question
from that root Fix the agreement mistake
questions
causes
. It can tell us every detail of crime
that are
why, when, and how. Certainly, we need to talk about genetic Change the verb form
is
causes
, a police investigation team needs to discover parent’s
criminal records of Fix the agreement mistake
parents’
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a suspect
suspect
. Fix the agreement mistake
suspects
For example
, a group of people arranged bank robbery. In this
case, a police department will analyze genetic
issues of possible suspects. Correct article usage
the genetic
However
, we should remember that it is quite hard to determine criminal behavior
has genetic Change the spelling
behaviour
causes
.
I agree that lack of money and job loss are
affecting some people to commit a Change the verb form
is
crime
. if it is done randomly, perhaps we do not need to talk about genetic causes
. I suppose that authorities made decisions based on fact and evidence which can tell us what we should do in
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apply
next
. For instance
: Poor
person Correct article usage
a Poor
stolen
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stole
has stolen
mobile
phone from Correct article usage
a mobile
passenger
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a passenger
the passenger
in
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on
train
. In Correct article usage
a train
this
case, everything was clear that the purpose and the reason. I think that an investigation team will analyze genetic
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the genetic
causes
of this
crime
and they will update related information on database
.
In my opinion, there is a lot of Add an article
the database
a database
crime
incidents recorded in the police department every day. The Ministry of Justice should make a deep analysis of criminal behavior
and its relations. According to the Research report of Mongolian National University, extremely serious crimes Change the spelling
behaviour
commit
by someone who has genetic Change the form of the verb
committed
causes
of criminal behavior
.
To sum up, I strongly believe that Change the spelling
behaviour
the
criminal Correct article usage
apply
behavior
has genetic Change the spelling
behaviour
causes
. Also
, recent studies and law enforcement agencies have confirmed this
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