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Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

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In
this
 modern busy world, the proportion of foreign settlement witnessed a conspicuous increase due to some cogent reasons.A huge community of the population from various nations decide to move overseas because of the greater standards of living,
although
this
 decision has its own strengths and weaknesses.
However
, from my perspective, the benefits of
this
 choice greatly outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly
, living abroad has a myriad of strong points.To cue evidence,in recent years, many people
specially
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 young adults leave their motherland for educational issues.
For instance
, advanced societies like America and Canada have progressive and standardized learning
environment
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as a result
 of
this
 they can gain powerful academic degrees and empirical knowledge so better social status and job offers might happen for them in the foreseeable future.
On the other hand
,
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 a new life in a nonnative environment has its own potential problems like social isolation and homesickness.
For example
, newcomers have no idea about
norms
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 and old traditions of a host country so they might make mistakes.A good illustration of
this
 is that men
except
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 their brothers,father and husband can not touch or handshake with Muslim women and if anyone
do
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this
, they will see rejection from local inhabitants.To sum up, these circumstances make you feel
depressedand
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depressed and
depressed
 homesick. To conclude, every
individuals
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 should carefully analyse immigration and
prospects
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 of a selected destination because each region has its own pros and cons.By the way, in my opinion, one can clearly see pleasing results if they choose things properly and consider everything in
details
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 before their emigration.
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