Doing an enjoyable activity with children can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is often an argued issue

children

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do an enjoyable

activity

can be improved to their's

cretaivtity

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creativity

than reading in many TV debates we can see that. It is possible to improve children's

skill

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skills

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and

creativity

by doing

joyable

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enjoyable

activities than reading books? Yes, it is possible,

therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

To begin

with,

creativity

and skill can be developed by doing their's free activities like playing and etc who are the infants. When a kid likes to do any

activity

while he will learn a new thing from

this

undoubtedly,

thus

, he does frequently and would be increased their's

creativity

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ideas.

For example

, in Australia schools have started

activitiy

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activity

based oof kinder garden for kids, these schools never teach any lesson and they give

a

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space to a child play and does any

activity

which he likes,

as a result

, many innovators and creators are lived in

this

nation.

Hence

, parents should give permission to do their's little one does any

joyable

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enjoyable

activites

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activities

than reading books.

Moreover

, reading books can develop only

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academic knowledge than

improving

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skill development. Nowadays, people should have any ability for their's career-purpose because we are living in a competitive world while not only

enoughs

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enough

the education qualification but

also

needs any special ability than others.

For instance

, the

legent

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legend

elegant

Indian Cricket player Mr Sachin,

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did not pass tenth grade in his school life because he did love more Cricket than studying while his parents did allow

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do his

joyable

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enjoyable

activity

as Cricket than reading in his childhood period,

as a result

, now he is a remarkable player around the world.

Therefore

, parents should encourage

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their's little

one

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does

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any special

activity

. To conclude, reading is the utmost

habits

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for everyone especially the

school boys

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schoolboys

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but doing an enjoyable

activity

can develop

to

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their's skills and

creativity

than reading a book.

Therefore

I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society among

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pre-teens.