Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of planting

trees

in the world because

trees

very

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helpful to create fresh

air

. So some people deem that

trees

must be planted in open space of town by people compared

than

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building more home. I accord entirely with the nations and

this

essay will

further

elaborate

about

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plantation

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of

trees

in

cities

. Commencing with the most prominent reason why

trees

are

pivotal

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part of

like

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life

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as well as it must be planted in place of

cities

because it helps to decrease the

temperature

of surrounding areas. By

this

, we have seen the

temperature

rates in towns generally is high.

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, we should

planted

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trees

where some areas of

cities

because it reduces the

temperature

of

environment

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the environment

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.

For example

, in India, there are many

cities

as well as

government

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the government

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faced

temperature

problem of

cities

so

government

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the government

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would take

mission

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of plantation in

such

cities

like

delhi

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. Another worth considering

reason

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of my agreement is affixed with the improved

air

qulity

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quality

index, which

is not only matter

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for human life but

also

it is effective on animals as well as food cycle. By

this

,

trees

helps

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improved

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air

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quality index

through

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producing O2 in

air

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.

Therefore

, mankind

have

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seen that in

such

places where

trees

are more there

air

qulits

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quality

quilts

index is below the 100, it is

good

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number among

this

pollution. To conclude,

eventhough

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even though

housing

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the housing

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is need

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need

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of

human

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humans

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, I think we can not

imagination

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without

trees

a better environment of the world and better health

of

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humans.