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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

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Nowadays, it
is become
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 an issue that to make business connections with native countries is
positive
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a positive
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 or negative impact, whereas, many
people
offenend
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offered
offend
 that change, but some masses welcomed it from their heart. Personally, I feel it is a great step towards the progress of the
country
.
Firstly
, the business between the nations
make
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 new possible ways to boost the economy where
public
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 get good employment opportunities with satisfactory income. It not only supports countries
economy
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economies
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 but
also
 improves the infrastructure.
For example
,
india
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India
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 is a developing
country
 so, it needs aids from other nations .
Therefore
, India welcomes other nations to invest their money in their
country
 like to give land for
setup
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 their head office and make plants for increasing the production.
However
, the biggest fear is that it
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effects
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affects
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 the
culture
 of the
country
, crowed easily influence
towards
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the western
culture
,
therefore
, the extension of their own
culture
 is becoming
biggest
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 issue in some countries. Like, in my own state
punjab
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Punjab
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 which is known for
his
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its
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culture
 and values, but now
people
 forget it. According to
recent
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a recent
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 survey,
people
 don't know
main
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the main
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 festivals and their history which is very shameful for their youngsters. If
people
 leave behind their roots they
don't survive no
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don't survive any
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 long so
people
 keep
that things
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 in their mind. In conclusion,
although
people
 oppose that change to save their
culture
 and values, it can't be neglected for well fair for the
country
 so ,
people
 need to be
patience
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 to accept
this
 change.
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