The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
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The bar chart illustrates how many
Japanese
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travelled overseas over a decade from 1985 to 1995
while
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the line chart displays the percentage of these tourists who chose Australia as their destination between 1985 to 1994.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
Japanese
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travelling abroad increased over the given period,
as well as
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, the
number
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of
Japanese
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visiting Australia.
According to
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the data, the
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of
Japanese
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travelling overseas accounted for 5
million
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in 1985 and kept rising until 1990, at 11
million
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,
then
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fell slightly to just over 10
million
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. From that point, the
number
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of
Japanese
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visiting foreign countries steadily rose to its peak in 1995 which was three times higher than that of a decade earlier, at 15
million
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. Turning to the line graph, only two per
cent
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of total
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tourists opted for visiting Australia in 1985. Two years later, it doubled to four per
cent
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and continued to rise to just under five per
cent
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in 1988. A minimal drop can be seen in 1989, at just above four per
cent
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. In the late 18th century, the
number
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of
Japanese
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travelling overseas soared to just above six per
cent
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in 1993, at its pinnacle, and stood at exactly six per
cent
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in 1994.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, number, million, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist market
  • overseas travel
  • tourism industry
  • international campaigns
  • economic prosperity
  • travel preferences
  • market share
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trend
  • attracting
  • destination
  • variability
  • contributing factors
  • currency exchange rates
  • speculate
  • tourism policies
  • competitive markets
  • popularity
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