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Given is a bar chart illustrating how people access news in 2013, 2015 and 2017. In summary, most people watched news through
television
 in all three years.
Moreover
, the
percentage
 of three
medias
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media
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 decreased, while one of
it
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them
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 increased. In 2013,
television
 had the highest
percentage
 with 80%, after 2 years, it slightly dropped to 68%. The
second
 highest media is
newspapers
, it was around a half of
television’s
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televisions
television
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.
Radio
 and
internet
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the internet
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 had a similar
percentage
 at around 32% in 2013, while both
newspapers
 and
radio
 had downward trends from 2013 to 2015.
In contrast
,
internet
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the internet
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 was the only category that rose from 32% to 40%. From 2015 to 2017,
television
 mildly ascended to 70%, while
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
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 increased by 30% to 70%.
On the contrary
,
newspapers
 reduced to 20% and
radio
 remained with no change. In 2017,
television
 was still the media with the highest
percentage
,
where
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whereas
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internet
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the internet
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 was the only media that increase in
percentage
.
Moreover
,
less
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fewer
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 people prefer accessing news through
newspapers
 and
radio
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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